show vs tell

I met up with my critique group once again.  We had a full group this time and lots of stuff to discuss and critique.

Mr. Nasty has made his appearance.  🙂

I am trying to write every day, but at the same time I’m packing to move to a new place.  It makes things difficult.  Not only that, I picked up a Christmas angel from my church and need to shop for him.

I did send my first couple of chapters to a friend to see what she thought about it.  She’s seen my early work and knows of my overall improvement.  I haven’t reached the million word yet, but I think I’m getting close to that.  I mention that because yesterday I looked at something I wrote back in 2009.  I was shocked because it’s like 95% telling, 4% info dump and maybe 1 % showing.  It’s really difficult showing rather than telling, but after hearing Lori Wolfe read a short scene with it telling and then showing helped a whole lot.

A few other things.  I’m debating on when to start a professional facebook page and twitter account.  I haven’t done it yet, but I figure it’ll be sooner rather than later.

One other thing.  I’m over 19K words now  😀